![]() With that said, the reason I am giving it a solid 4 for now is that it's a bit different from the usual Isekai story. Quite a number of story elements have been changed almost from the start, and I suspect that the manga differences were based on whatever changes were made between WN to LN. One thing to note, for those coming in to read it after reading the manga, is that this is the WN original. ![]() It could use an editor to help smooth the flow. I'm not sure if it's due to the translator or an extremely rough origin source. I like the story, but it feels a bit stiff and stilted at times. Will update once again after another 10 or so chapters. I'm tempted to downgrade it to 3-Stars, given how slow the build-up remains to be, but that's probably my bias from being spoiled a bit by the manga version giving a bit more even viewpoints between his side and his friends' sides. One main thing to note is that there hasn't been much of a peep from the PoV of his friends up to this point, and that once again, if you're coming in from the Manga, this is the WN version that has a notable difference. ![]() The story is still chugging along somewhat leisurely, our MC is growing his harem bit by bit (and actually being physically intimate with them), and setting up a base of operations, but translations remain MTL-stiff and in need of an editor. ![]()
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